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Tuesday 10 January 2012

Art Story

This week Hannah Ford, who is heavily involved in the Art Department, has been selling her products such as T-Shirts and mugs to raise awareness about war in underlying messages throughout her work and giving the profit to charity. I spoke to her about why she wanted to commit to this project and what she planned on doing next. The following is my first draft on her project:
This is a good story to cover because my target audience is youth, therefore showing hard work of students in a local newspaper can only encourage other to follow suit.  This represents the target audience because the age of the interviewee and allows students to feel proud of themselves and others around them. This fits in with Halls Storm and Stress Model again. As a first draft I think this is starting to take shape because I have followed the basic rules of reporting (who, what, where, when and why) and have started to represent the needs of my target audience in terms of mode of address, language and interviewees. To improve this in my final draft I need to attain quotes from teachers who work at Bodmin College and make sure the story flows when read.




Bodmin College student Hannah Ford has been selling her art work to raise awareness for her chosen charity, Cancer Research. The Year 12 has been producing T-Shirts and mugs with her work printed on them. She feels that the project has gone rather well and raised enough money to make a difference. Bodmin College is renown for being one step ahead and the teachers are always eager to help a student with an interesting project.


The college is always investing in new technologies so the students have the best chance of producing high quality pieces of work. The newly furbished print room allows students to follow the same line of work as Andy Warhol. They can print on T-Shirts, mugs, and even start producing their own brand of wallpaper. Hopefully this will encourage more students to get 'hands on' with their work and begin a career already with a firm grounding of knowledge. 

1 comment:

  1. Good evidence here of your drafting of an article and searching for stories that are relevant to your target audience.

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